[考博英语]考博英语改错模拟练习题及答案解析（80）_考博_旭晨教育

考博英语 改错模拟练习题及答案解析（80）

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Aimlessness has hardly been typical of the postwar Japan whose productivity and social harmony are the envy of the United States and Europe.But increasingly the Japanese is seeing a decline of their __1__traditional work-moral values. Ten years ago young people were hardworking and saw their jobs as their primary reason for being,but now Japan has large fulfilled its economic needs, and young people __2__don't know where they should go next.The coming of the age of the postwar baby boom and an entry __3__of women into the male-dominated job market has limited the opportunities __4__of teen-agers who are already questioning the heavy personal sacrifices involved climbing Japan's rigid social ladder to good __5__schools and jobs. In a recent survey, it was found that only 24.5percent Japanese students were fully satisfied with school life,compared __6__with 67.2 percent of students in the United States. In addition, far more Japanese workers expressed dissatisfaction with their jobs than did their counterparts in the 10 countries surveyed. __7__While often praised by foreigners for its emphasis on the basics.Japanese education tends to stress test taking and mechanic learning __8__over creativity and self-expression. Last year Japan experienced 2,125 incidents of school violence, including 929 assaults on teachers.Amid the outcry, many conservative leaders are seeking a return

to the prewar emphasis on moral education. Last year Mitsuo Detoyama,

who was then education minister, raised his eyebrow when he argued __9__

that liberal reforms introduced by the American occupation authorities after World War II had weakened the "Japanese morality of respect of parents." __10__

答案及解析:

1.is--are

the加上形容词一类人的时候后面应用动词的复数形式，如：The old receive particular respect in Chinese society.

2.large-largely

这里large是修饰fullfilled的，所以应改为largely，表示“大部分地”，如：The fundis largely financed through government borrowing.

3.the(age)--/

动词词组come of age表示“已成年”，中间不用任何冠词，所以它一旦变为-ing形式仍然保持原样。另外要避免将原句误读成The coming of ,the age of the postwar baby boom,这样断句意思解释不通。

4.has--have

有两个原因限制了青少年进好的学校找到好的工作，这两个原因由and连接作并列主语，所以谓语动词应该用复数。

5.involved^--in

involved后面少了in，表示“关于，涉及到”，如All the children were involved in the school play.

6.^Japanese--of

当percent做名词时，它后面应加上介词of，如：

The report states that 42 percent of the alunmi contributed to the endowment.

当percent作形容词或者副词时，则不加of。如：

There has been a ten percent increase in the number of new students arriving at polytechnic this year.

7.^countries--other

从上句话中可知道Japan也参与了这次普查，因此在这句话里的比较结构中Japan应和其他10个同意参加普查的国家进行比较，所以应注明是10 other countries。

8.mechanic--mechanical

mechanic是名词，表示“制造工，技工”，所以这里应把它改为mechanical表示“机械的”。

9.eyebrow--eyebrows

toraise one's eyebrow 表示“(某事)引起(某人)的惊讶或不赞同”，如：

He raised his eyebrows over some of the suggestions.

10.of--for

respect 后面通常跟for接人，表示“对(某人)的尊重”，如：respect for the old。